I spent at least 20% of my break trying to figure out what would be my new interest, but even as the break comes to an end, I still have no idea what to dig.

The last minute, I decided that I might as well try to make poetry.

Firstly, the only source of poetry for me is probably tumblr (as well as my only source for practically everything else), and secondly, I am very inexperienced. So if you're a poet or you know something about poet (whoever reading this), please leave a comment or whatever, critique me! Thank you.

I made two poems but I'll just post this one because I like it better?


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pain the numb
 
The pain, the shock /
The fist, the hit /
A good fight to forget /
How it feels to not feel /

A punch to the face /
Will wake your nerves /
Erase the numb /
From your broken heart.

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That's that. I hope it's good? Tell me what you think. Thanks for reading!

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